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Writing Like a Rose: with Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication & inspiration
How to write a semi-perfect sonnet

Discover what’s imperfect here.

Then, after summarizing,

 uncover it perfectly,

until you have a remnant

of what a sonnet once was —

before you chopped it in half,

trimmed up its syllable count,

tossed its meter and ruined it.

This sample semi-perfect sonnet is copyright 2026 by Jessica McLean. File sharing is encouraged.

“If thou shouldst say, ‘It is enough, I have reached perfection,’ all is lost. For it is the function of perfection to make one know one’s imperfection.””
— Saint Augustine, from his theological treatise, “On Man’s Perfection in Righteousness”

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I’m Jessica

Welcome to The Rose! This is my literary corner of the internet, dedicated to all things creative writing. Here is where I keep a collection of my work. This includes everything from poems to short stories to writing tips, aka my collection of AD-Libs. I hope you enjoy what I have written here and are able to relate to my work. But ultimately, I hope this site inspires you to love writing as much as I do!

Writing Like a Rose: With Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication, and Inspiration.
Please see the “About” pages for more information!!

Feedback: Criticism is welcomed!! And, feel free to leave comments if you like or dislike something.

What’s here: See the different categories for different poem formats! They include sestinas, villanelles, sonnets, etheree, semi-perfect sonnets, haiku and others.

Most recently published:  “How to write a semi-perfect sonnet”, a sample semi-perfect sonnet and “When you see a spider,” a reverse etheree.

Important: Due to the story’s sensitive nature, the sestina, “Coming to America”, is password protected. If you would like the password, please email me at magnoliamclean@comcast.net.

AD-Lib is here! Make sure you stop by the AD-Lib section! You can view previous AD-Libs under the “AD-Libs” tab to get some great tips on your writing and find out what is going through my head as I write. You can also view old Ad-Libs by year under the “Archived Entries” tab.

Coming soon: You’ll be surprised! ;) I always try to keep this site updated, so there’s always something new here!

The fine print: Finally, please read IMPORTANT copyright information before proceeding; however, I do encourage the file sharing of my work.

Again, welcome! And, enjoy your time at “The Rose”!!

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