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Writing Like a Rose: with Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication & inspiration
Rubbing my mother’s feet

My mother asked me, “Come here and rub my feet.”

Past dinner, this is frequently her request.

Her couch is where we both usually meet.

 

The lotion I apply smells floral and sweet,

after I remove her socks at her behest.

My mother asked me, “Come here and rub my feet.”

 

My thumbs dig through her sole’s calluses and greet

her toes and instep, her ankle’s cleft and crest.

Her couch is where we both usually meet.

 

Tucking her blanket underarm like a sheet,

she exclaims my foot massages are the best.

My mother asked me, “Come here and rub my feet.”

 

Our conversation and laughter isn’t discreet,

as she wanes in the pillows, trying to rest.

Her couch is where we both usually meet.

 

For her, I know this always feels like a treat;

but, I have done this less since I became a guest.

My mother asked me, “Come here and rub my feet.”

Her couch is where we both usually meet.

This villanelle is copyright 2026 by Jessica McLean. File sharing is encouraged.

This poem is dedicated to my mom, Heidi McLean, and to our little ritual of rubbing her feet with lotion after dinner.

My mom taking me for ice cream for my birthday in August 2025.

“They both began to giggle and then — for the first time in their lives — Lauren and Emily fell into a side-splitting round of laughter, the cleansing, complete sort of laughter only a mother and daughter can share.”

— Karen Kingsbury, on page 271 of her book, “Even Now”

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I’m Jessica

Welcome to The Rose! This is my literary corner of the internet, dedicated to all things creative writing. Here is where I keep a collection of my work. This includes everything from poems to short stories to writing tips, aka my collection of AD-Libs. I hope you enjoy what I have written here and are able to relate to my work. But ultimately, I hope this site inspires you to love writing as much as I do!

Writing Like a Rose: With Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication, and Inspiration.
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Feedback: Criticism is welcomed!! And, feel free to leave comments if you like or dislike something.

What’s here: See the different categories for different poem formats! They include sestinas, villanelles, sonnets, etheree, semi-perfect sonnets, haiku and others.

Most recently published:  “Political violence”, an etheree, and “Rubbing my mother’s feet”, a villanelle.

Important: Due to the story’s sensitive nature, the sestina, “Coming to America”, is password protected. If you would like the password, please email me at magnoliamclean@comcast.net.

AD-Lib is here! You can view previous AD-Libs under the “AD-Libs” tab to get some great tips on your writing and find out what is going through my head as I write. You can also view old Ad-Libs by year under the “Archived Entries” tab.

Coming soon: You’ll be surprised! ;) I always try to keep this site updated, so there’s always something new here!

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