The Rose

Writing Like a Rose: with Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication & inspiration
Asking her out (Original, Couplets Version)

As Brandon’s finger hovered over “call”,

he exhaled a deep breath, then felt it fall.

Hearing her phone ring, he breathed, “Calm down, wow!

“Ruthie’s your friend, the same as for years now.”

“Hello?”, she answered. “Yeah, what’s going on?

I’m just hanging at my parents’ house. C’mon —”

“Want to go on a date with me?”, he blurted.

It was suddenly there, somehow inserted.

“Uh, sure,” she said, her voice sounding surprised.

“Ok, what time? I’ll come get you,” he devised.

They planned for a bit before he hung up,

it all feeling too good to interrupt.

See recent calls for cupid’s true arrow,

eternally lodged in their hearts’ marrow.

This love poem is written by Jessica McLean and is dedicated to Ruthie and Brandon Paulus on their wedding day, October 1, 2022.

Brandon and Ruthie Paulus get married during a ceremony at Auburn Hills Christian Center on October 1, 2022, seen here building their unity cross together.

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I’m Jessica

Welcome to The Rose! This is my literary corner of the internet, dedicated to all things creative writing. Here is where I keep a collection of my work. This includes everything from poems to short stories to writing tips, aka my collection of AD-Libs. I hope you enjoy what I have written here and are able to relate to my work. But ultimately, I hope this site inspires you to love writing as much as I do!

Writing Like a Rose: With Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication, and Inspiration.
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Feel free to leave comments if you like or dislike something.

Criticism is welcomed!!

Warning: Poem formats may vary; they include, free verse, etheree, sonnets, and others.

Most Recently Published:  “Memories of Snowfall”, a villanelle and “Bike for sale”, a villanelle

Important: Due to the story’s sensitive nature, the sestina, “Coming to America”, is password protected. If you would like the password, please email me at magnoliamclean@comcast.net.

AD-Lib is here! You can view previous AD-Libs under the “AD-Libs” tab to get some great tips on your writing and find out what is going through my head as I write. You can also view old Ad-Libs by year under the “Archived Entries” tab.

And, Coming Soon: (you’ll be surprised ;) )

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