The Rose

Writing Like a Rose: with Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication & inspiration
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A

soul eye

peers into

its telescope,

searching deeply

for universal truth.

But, when reflected off

the glassy distance inside

the hollow body, this little eye

cannot rightly spy. So, it tries

refocusing the different lenses

and adjusting its raw emotions,

until the blurry picture is so

coherent that, it can stare

plainly into the dark—

Wait, fix it again.

   I think everything

around you,

just now,

moved.

Copyright of Jessica Anne McLean, 2008, all rights reserved.

Note: this is a double-sided Etheree, where the poem is mirrored on its own 10th line. It’s the author’s choice to repeat the 10th line or not. So be nice, this is a special kind of Etheree.

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I’m Jessica

Welcome to The Rose! This is my literary corner of the internet, dedicated to all things creative writing. Here is where I keep a collection of my work. This includes everything from poems to short stories to writing tips, aka my collection of AD-Libs. I hope you enjoy what I have written here and are able to relate to my work. But ultimately, I hope this site inspires you to love writing as much as I do!

Writing Like a Rose: With Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication, and Inspiration.
Please see the “About” pages for more information!!

Feel free to leave comments if you like or dislike something.

Criticism is welcomed!!

Warning: Poem formats may vary; they include, free verse, etheree, sonnets, and others.

Most Recently Published:  “Memories of Snowfall”, a villanelle and “Bike for sale”, a villanelle

Important: Due to the story’s sensitive nature, the sestina, “Coming to America”, is password protected. If you would like the password, please email me at magnoliamclean@comcast.net.

AD-Lib is here! You can view previous AD-Libs under the “AD-Libs” tab to get some great tips on your writing and find out what is going through my head as I write. You can also view old Ad-Libs by year under the “Archived Entries” tab.

And, Coming Soon: (you’ll be surprised ;) )

Finally, please read IMPORTANT copyright information before proceeding; however, I do encourage the file sharing of my work.

Again, welcome! And, enjoy your time at “The Rose”!!

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