The Rose

Writing Like a Rose: with Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication & inspiration

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              Annoyingly

                                So unwanted, but

It is time.

So you turn the thing off

                And finish up.  Grab your coat

                                             Your shoes

                                                   Now where’s the key to lock up?

                                                          Your things

                                                                 Your money, just in case,

                                                                           And what books do I need?

                                                                  As is always the state.

A glance at the clock. 

It’s still time.

 And just as you leave,

          your friend says,

             “One moment please!”

                                   Do you have a pencil?

       Some candy?

   A chat?

         And Friday!

     Oh yes! 

          How was that?

 A glance.  An answer, a grin.

It’s still time.

And then you remember

                After they’ve left

                                Oh where did I put it!

                                                I must find it at best!

                                                                But it’s due today!

                                                                Oh damn! It shouldn’t.

Then your glimpse spies the mirror

                Pries a quizzical gaze

                                Oh! What will they think of me?

                                                Do I look ok?

A glance. An answer, a grin. A find. Reassured.

It’s still time.

And as you dash for the door,

                you MUST trip on that box!

                                You know, the one your great aunt sent you?

                                                Oh door! Please lock!

A glance. An answer, a grin. A find. Reassured. A win.

It’s still time.

And as you trudge over forwards,

                Your things hunched on your burdened back,

                                Like your grandmother in lots of wind,

                                                You again begin

                                                                To walk.

And they know

            by your gaze,

                your quick, determined stride

                                That no one can stop you

                                                Because you must arrive.

And after you’ve puffed

                      All that way,

                                Because it is

                                                And never fast enough on any day,

You fling open the doors

                And tiptoe to your seat

                                And listen to the world

                                                Eight hours deep.

And not much happened

                before that time,

                         except the future, which is open wide,

      And this you tell

            to the ear of your friend,

                   as you snicker and yawn

                   and wait till the end.

                                                       Just a walk to class

                                                       And that was all;

                                                       Just a piece of your time.

                                                       Not important at all.

A glance. An answer, a grin. A find. Reassured. A win. A burdened back. A stride. A seat.

                And a walk to class, because

It was time.

Copyright 2007 of Jessica Anne McLean. All rights reserved. File Sharing is Encouraged.

Inspired by Valerie Prescott, who passed by my door as she walked to class.

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I’m Jessica

Welcome to The Rose! This is my literary corner of the internet, dedicated to all things creative writing. Here is where I keep a collection of my work. This includes everything from poems to short stories to writing tips, aka my collection of AD-Libs. I hope you enjoy what I have written here and are able to relate to my work. But ultimately, I hope this site inspires you to love writing as much as I do!

Writing Like a Rose: With Beauty, Thorns, Addiction, Dedication, and Inspiration.
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Warning: Poem formats may vary; they include, free verse, etheree, sonnets, and others.

Most Recently Published:  “Memories of Snowfall”, a villanelle and “Bike for sale”, a villanelle

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